08 November 2010

Alone


Today I discovered a beautiful place;
A stream merrily flowing with breezes plenty,
Grasses so green and flowers in bloom,
Water so fresh and warm sunny skies.
I immediately fell for such a place so lovely.
I thought of you imagined you with me-
I realised you weren’t by my side.
I so wished I could share that moment with you,
But you weren’t by my side.
So I stood alone, I was alone,
I was so alone.

10 comments:

  1. @illusionaire: one inspiration before I drifted off one night ^_^

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  2. i blog hi ka follow ve i phal em?

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  3. @zualbonez: phal teh reng mai i duh phot cuan

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  4. But you weren’t by my side.
    So I stood alone, I was alone,
    I was so alone.

    -beautiful end

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  5. Being alone is sad! but you feel warm inside because you know someday you will share beautiful moments with that special person sitting by your side!

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  6. @Zualbonez: appreciate it ^_^

    @Maisek: I hope so! In the meantime I'll just keep writing poems...hehehe

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  7. Alfred Lord Tennyson-in "For men may come and men may go,But I go on forever" a tih te pawh min hriat chhuah tir e a...Nature poem ho tak hi aw. Lung an va ti leng em!

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  8. You talk of loneliness in solitude... I understand that... but also, ever come across lonely crowds? :)

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  9. @Raldawna: Agreed!

    @Andy: Once in a while, eventually one does come across one :)

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